The Last Shot

 

Neera Handa Dr

Mar 25

2 min read

The Last Shot!

‘Response for the Microfiction challenge’

Photo by Sabri Tuzcu on Unsplash

The first thing he noticed were the three women doing tequila shots, then the bag on the floor, circled by three pairs of beautiful, slim, sexy legs!

Putting his own bag next to his stool, he ordered a scotch. Planning his next move, he didn’t notice one of them had leaned over.

“So did you follow beauty, or money?”

They all laughed.

“Have a tequila on us. Your friend would’ve loved it!!”

Remembering what he had witnessed, he cringed. Then remembering his dying friend, he smiled, “Why not, let’s!”

After a few, he walked out with one of the bags.

My response is to 

’ The Beginnings prompt.

Start your story with this line
The first thing he noticed were the three women doing tequila shots.

, I’m not sure if I can submit more than three, but I’m really enjoying writing these Microfiction pieces a lot! It doesn’t matter if it is not in the challenge.

Microfiction Writing Challenge

Let’s Keep It Short!

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Thanks 

Ravyne Hawke

Ravyne Hawke

Poet, Fiction Writer, Essayist, Artist, Dreamer | “Enlightenment is when a wave realizes it is the Ocean” ~Thich Nhat Hanh

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 for such a great publication, a moveable fiesta, to borrow Hemingway, that keeps giving.

Thanks 

 for so many interesting and inspiring prompts.

Weekly Prompts March 19–25, 2022. Your Microfiction Writing Challenge

Your own story on this prompt was such a blast!

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