Haiku

 

Resistance and hope 

a Haiku

The last leaf. Photo credit Author 


The moving finger 

wipes signs of the last season, 

the last leaf persists!


My first Haiku, finally, I dared to eat the peach! 

I had read a few Haikus on medium, and learned about the 5/7/5 rule (five syllables in the first line, seven in the second, and five again in the third). However, still not sure of the “cutting word”, or a kareji, that needs to create contrast, where it needs to be.

Thanks to Apra whose poem/Haiku inspired me today, or was it yesterday!

Her Haiku rat race, was just wonderfully pithy, short and meaningful. 

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